Hi,
That is pretty much what I did with the 53 micron sieve. Works great.
I definitely saw 2 spots on each larvae with a void between them of clear tissue, which today have a silver edge to them, they really look like eyes. The rudimentary spine is the other main thing visible, when the light hits them right I can see the transparent flesh above and below the spine, it is iridescent, and that they are laterally compressed. You may be right about the sliver off the head, could be a scratch or dust in the water.
There were 5 alive this morning seen at once. 3 were head down near the bottom most of the time. Every so often they would swim like mad at something either to get away from stimulus or to get food, not sure which. 2 others mostly swam horizontally, the biggest one having a tiny black spot near the tail. That one seems to make the most deliberate movements.
Not sure I ever will get large numbers of fertile eggs, as the pairs are on a standard 120 with central overflow, it's a mixed reef display. Not set up for egg collecting, and there are 2 Chromis atripectoralis in there that madly race around eating eggs. Per spawn I usually get over 100 eggs most of which are cloudy or sink to the bottom. And if I did what to feed them... I think in the past I was collecting too many dodgy eggs and they were poisoning the water when they decayed.
Since I am 41 I can expect to soon lose the ability to close focus and that will be the end of this project. After about 40 the lens loses it's elasticity in most people. So if you have pelagic eggs on your bucket list and are young enough to have the ability to close focus do it now before it's too late. I seriously doubt I will be able to see the eyes of a pelagic larval fish with reading glasses in a couple years when my vision gets worse. No time like the present.
Kate